Thursday, February 26, 2009 |
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He made me kneel over then he spreading me open. I felt . I moaned biting . In the morning bruises and .
I want you to , he tells me, , .
You dirty fucking bitch, he curses me softly and , he .
Yes, . Now say it. Say you like it.
I do. I love it. I adore it. His voice shakes and , the way he .
Now he takes over and two fingers, . . . I pleading, . sloppy that I , swollen and springy. .
When he comes for me I , and because I make him. groan, , but I hold off, rocking on the brink, because I love , greedily and selfishly .Labels: privacy, speechless, totally stole this idea from a joyce carol oates story |
posted by O @ 07:47 |
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Lovely my dear! How I had fun imagining the words to plug in!
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I'm glad you liked it! I wrote this and once I'd redacted, I was amazed at how easy it was to imagine other words. It's kind of a rorshach test now, everyone will see what they want to see.
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This is a wonderful post...I had fun filling in the blanks.
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I replaced every word with different types of vegetable. (Genius.)
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Oh, Mad Libs!
I'm sorry, that's where my head goes. I have kids. :)
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I like tests where there are no wrong answers.
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That was just what I thought -- it's like a Rorschach test. Although it's less random than that, since you do guide us somewhat.
Whatever -- fabulously inventive, and as always, well worth the read.
Love Sapphire the Elegant Slut
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I love that the words usually subjected to black-boxing are left naked here. :)
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Hmmmm, now I may just spend the rest of my Sunday filling in the blanks in different ways...
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Incredibly fucking brilliant, you.
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Like a super sexy mad libs
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Lovely my dear! How I had fun imagining the words to plug in!